Over the course of this writing 110 class I have completed lots of reading responses and they have gradually gotten better over the semester. Either from more lengthy responses or more quality writing within my responses I have made improvements to my reading responses. Take my reading responses to “The Hawk” reading, I would just simply answer the question or briefly restate it and get into my immediate response.
While some of my responses are lengthy a lot of the wording is just fluff, or rather pointless wording to add length to my response. I do restate the question that’s being asked in some of my responses with “The Hawk” reading but a lot of the structure is unnecessary. Compared to a reading response like Ross Gay’s “The First Incitement” reading responses the structure of my answers is more detailed.
My responses in Ross Gay’s reading were more structurally sound. There isn’t a lot of unnecessary wording and I answer the question effectively while going into detail when I need to. Overall the structure and when and where I added necessary details are the main improvements to my reading responses over the semester.
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