Month: December 2025

Learning Outcome #4: Peer Review

Compared to high school the peer review process for me has changed a lot. For one, the purpose of doing peer review is slightly different. In high school for instance I would spend most of the peer review time only looking at local revisions. These are things like grammatical errors, small sentence structure mistakes, and if a paragraph was too short or too wordy. Compared to the peer review process now, while yes I do look for grammatical errors and things like wordiness, the main things I’m looking for are more big picture. This includes things like “does the overall paragraph get the point across to the reader?” Or “Does this source comparison have enough or your voice and does it make your stance clear?” Utilizing peer review for things like overarching themes and connections to the writers ideas/arguments makes the process much more effective. This always for one, a different perspective to look over the writing g which the author could add to their writing to make it appeal to a more diverse audience. And two, it always the authors writing to flow better because instead of small tweaks and changes, making more “bigger picture” changes always the writer to connect more with the reader.

Classwork example of peer review/analysis or reading

This is an example of what a typical “peer review” might look like in high school. Not a lot and only focuses on small parts of the text. Nor do these annotations mention any sort of overarching themes or “big picture” items.

End Comment on peer review

This end comment is just one example of comments made on a classmates writing that I peer reviewed. This later example of a peer review piece of mine is an example of how I switched from focusing on local revision items in writing to more big picture, global revisions.

Learning Outcome #3: Reading Response and Annotation

Over the course of this writing 110 class I have completed lots of reading responses and they have gradually gotten better over the semester. Either from more lengthy responses or more quality writing within my responses I have made improvements to my reading responses. Take my reading responses to “The Hawk” reading, I would just simply answer the question or briefly restate it and get into my immediate response.

“The Hawk” reading response questions

While some of my responses are lengthy a lot of the wording is just fluff, or rather pointless wording to add length to my response. I do restate the question that’s being asked in some of my responses with “The Hawk” reading but a lot of the structure is unnecessary. Compared to a reading response like Ross Gay’s “The First Incitement” reading responses the structure of my answers is more detailed.

Ross Gay’s “The First Incitement” reading response

My responses in Ross Gay’s reading were more structurally sound. There isn’t a lot of unnecessary wording and I answer the question effectively while going into detail when I need to. Overall the structure and when and where I added necessary details are the main improvements to my reading responses over the semester.

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